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WWW:
- some great shots, the narrative works well and really engages the audience.
- the lack of audio is a major factor - but i suppose in some ways it focuses the attention on the camerawork.
- entertaining
- lots of camera movement
- good narrative and use of shots
- fun to watch
- wide range of shots and camera movement
- good editing
- the range of shots was good and had a nice narrative
EBI:
- slight editing errors - theres a second where you can see the character standing still at the start of the hill shot
- label shots
- add sound
Learner Response
Next time i will make sure i label the shots to make my understanding of the different camera shots and angles more clear, as well as making it easier for others to identify which ones i have used in my work. I will also make slight changes when editing to make sure that certain parts of the video flow better.
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